Expert
- Shows weeks of work
- Audience is very interested
- I've done the work myself
- Research in my words – with my personality in it
- Contains humour(?)
- Interaction with the audience
- Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
- Shows three or four weeks of work
- Research is mostly in my own words
- Information is interesting and in my own words
- Adults have supported me without doing work for me
- Some humour (?)
- Some interaction with the audience
- Audience is attentive and interested
- Speech is clear
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
- Shows about a week’s work
- A little research – some in my own words
- Adults have done some of the work for me
- No interaction with the audience
- No humour
- Poor presentation
- Few pictures
- Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
- Reads the words on the presentation
- Clearly started at the last minute
- Hardly any info
- Parents have done a lot of it for me
- No pictures or steps
- Research is straight off the internet
- No humour
- Not finished on time
- Untidy presentation
- Speech is not very clear
That was amasing I liked how you had plenty of infomation. Next time you could get your images off crative commns. But I was really interested awesome P.I.
ReplyDeleteWow tom that was just amazing your pi's are just awesome.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made a mastake an just fixed it up.
I don't think you have to work on it.
GREAT WORK TOM
Awesome P.I. Tom i really enjoyed the stories and the facts. The prononceation of the words. The book was really cool to keep in LC13. But next time you could have made it shorter. Otherwise like a bous!
ReplyDeleteGreat work tom.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you had lots of info.
Next time you could make it a little bit shorter.
Sammy
great P.I Tom I could tell you spent ages on it and you prononced the great but you could have had a expreshion and stoped coughing
ReplyDeleteThat was kind of intresting but I think you could of slowed down a little bit and maybe some pictures would be good.
ReplyDeleteGreat P.I Tom!!
ReplyDeleteI was really interested to learn about Greek gods.
Next time you could maybe put it into a presentation instead of a script.
Great work Tom!!
Nice P.I Tom
ReplyDeleteI liked it how you pronounced the names perfect.
Next time you could make it a little bit shorter.
From Cam
Great PI Tom. That would taken weeks to do. Next time you could of shown us some pictures of the gods. But other than that great PI Tom!!
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That was a very clear and easy to understand PI Tom. I thought you pronounced it well like TC said, and you clearly understood how it was back then. You could have had more expression. Jaime.
very good I learnt a lot but it got long and stared to get tiny bit boring violet
You chose a really interesting topic, Tom. You had the class still, listening and interested for a long, long time. You spoke very clearly. We could understand everything you said. If we'd had time I think the kids would have many more questions because of the interest you created. Thank you so much for the book - it is a treasure.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI I loved it maybe next time show us some Pics but great I like how you spoke and I can not wait to read the book
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Tom! I really like how you told us heaps of things about the gods. You should have looked at us though.
ReplyDeleteWICKED P.I> Tom!
ReplyDeleteI liked it how you pronounced all the gods names right. Next time you could make it shorter!
FromCamryn Mabey!
Wow i loved your info Tom but you could of made it shorter
ReplyDeleteBy Campbell
Great PI Tome about the ancient Greek gods.I love how you had quite a loud voice and you pronounced the name properly.
ReplyDelete~India
WOW! That was so descriptive. You pronounced the names of the Greek gods properly (I thought Aphrodite was Af- ro- dite) You did very well at describing something so hard to describe.
Josh
Wow great PI you had lots of info.But you could have made it shorter.
ReplyDeleteWOW TOM!! That was sooooooo interesting. I loved how clear you spoke and your information was just so interesting . Next time... actually, you had no faults. It was just great.
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Great PI I liked how you had very interesting info I dont really know what you could do better jaide
Great pi Tom you spoke clear and learnt your scrip really well you could of had interaction with the audience
ReplyDeleteCindy
Nice P.I Tom I really liked your topic it was interesting ut maybe next time you could show us some pics.
ReplyDeleteNice pi Tom . You had lots of info but maybe next time you should have interaction with the audince
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