Argument Writing

PRIMARY SOFTNESS


Some schools are just being way too soft. They have rules that are completely ridiculous and totally over the top.
 Here are a few of those stupid rules: One school in England banned best friends, I don’t know why they did, but it sounds stupid to me. Another school banned hugs and hi-fives because it’s contact and in their school they don’t allow contact. Other schools banned stuff like cart-wheels, handstands and flips.
 I think that we should be able to do what we want because it’s our body and it should be our choice. Also most people know if they can do a back flip so why can’t they do a back flip.
 If you can’t practice cart wheels or other physical activities you’ll never get better at them. A lot of the things they ban are low risk but high reward; there is nothing like a perfectly landed flip.
 That is why I strongly agree some primary schools are being too soft on their students.