Expert
- Shows weeks of work
- Audience is very interested
- I've done the work myself
- Research in my words – with my personality in it
- Contains humour(?)
- Interaction with the audience
- Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
- Shows three or four weeks of work
- Research is mostly in my own words
- Information is interesting and in my own words
- Adults have supported me without doing work for me
- Some humour (?)
- Some interaction with the audience
- Audience is attentive and interested
- Speech is clear
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
- Shows about a week’s work
- A little research – some in my own words
- Adults have done some of the work for me
- No interaction with the audience
- No humour
- Poor presentation
- Few pictures
- Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
- Reads the words on the presentation
- Clearly started at the last minute
- Hardly any info
- Parents have done a lot of it for me
- No pictures or steps
- Research is straight off the internet
- No humour
- Not finished on time
- Untidy presentation
- Speech is not very clear
Great work Tom! I like the challenge at the end too!!! I like the house and everything. Next time you could make it so you can fit everything in your plan on it. Anyway great work Tom!
ReplyDeleteBest P.I all year I liked how you had a competition and used the audience. Next time you could have shaped roof
ReplyDeleteAwesome P.I Tom I loved the idea of making your dream house because I am making a dream house on google sketch up.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could try to not mumble as much but there wasn't too much mumbling.
From Cam
Wow Wow Wow that was so awesome and i like your house.
ReplyDeleteBut next time you could make up your mine up a bit faster.
Jaxon
That was a great PI Tom, great interaction and awesome creation. Next time you could put more expression in your voice. Jam
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely outstanding TOm! I really emjoy your PIs. I LOVED your topic, so creative!! You could have maybe had your competion sorted a bit better. Other than that I RRRREEEEEAAAAALLLLLYYYY enjoyed it! Well done. Grace
Great PI Tom. You had a good topic and challenge at the end. But next time you need to put more enthusiasm in your voice. Cindy.
Great PI Tom. You had a great creation and good info. Next time try not to spend so long on the interaction with the audience. Bex???
It was a very good PI. Looks like you did a lot of work. But it was a bit too long. Violet.
nice pi tom thanks for the sheep and pencil I really liked your pi It was really cool I think you did really well next time try be more organised with the voteing
ReplyDeleteJo Jo
Nice P.I. tom your house was awesome and so detailed. Next time you could talk with more expression. From Camryn.
Caleb says...
ReplyDeleteWOW that was the best P.I. I have ever seen it was amazing. That would of taken your whole holidays to work out all of that. Next time you could of been more organised with the competition.
Sam says...
AMAZING tom that was the best P.I that I have ever seen. I really liked how you were really organised and ready to start. Next time you could make the competition go faster!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME PI Tom!!!!!!! I liked how you made it really detailed. Next time you could paint the inside walls.
ReplyDeleteGreat Pi though.
That was such an awesome PI I really love your dream house but in the future you could do a bigger model
ReplyDeleteFrom Rumer
like a bous pi tom loved it because of every thing didnt not like anything.
ReplyDeleteCool P.I Tom. That was so creative question is that your dream house ? you spoke clear and confident. Next time you could look at the audience. Other than that good work.
ReplyDeleteFrom Salma
Cool PI tom. Especially when you look at audience.Good work and you must of spent alot of time on your pi i can tell that.Nice job.~india
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Tom. I really like how you had the thing at the end. I also liked your topic! Next time you could speak louder. But other than that great PI!!!!!!!!
~Maddi~*~
Cool PI Tom. I really liked you're topic.
I really like how you make a model.
Next time you can speck loder. but other than that cool PI
fROM JAS
WOW WOW WOW that was amazing awesome but next time you could hold up the house
ReplyDeleteTom your P.I was great I liked how you did it on your dream house and i also liked how you did that challenge for us to draw our own dream house. I saw that it took you alot of time building that dream house of yours but you still couldn't fit some things in it. But maybe next time you could interact with the audience a little more. :)
ReplyDeleteWOW I think that was the best PI in AGES. I just which it was a bigger model.
ReplyDeleteTom your P.I was so awesome i liked how you did your P.I on your dream house and how you did a challenge for the class but next time you could speak a bit clearer
ReplyDeleteW.O.W Tom your P.I. was awesome I really liked how you made a full model it was very interesting and it was the right timing and I can't remeber anthing that was that bad
ReplyDeleteCool PI tom i liked how u included the class though the comp.
ReplyDeleteNext time try and do something where you have to resrech fact.
from saul
really cool but next time you could have more info
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