Expert
- Shows weeks of work
- Audience is very interested
- I've done the work myself
- Research in my words – with my personality in it
- Contains humour(?)
- Interaction with the audience
- Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
- Shows three or four weeks of work
- Research is mostly in my own words
- Information is interesting and in my own words
- Adults have supported me without doing work for me
- Some humour (?)
- Some interaction with the audience
- Audience is attentive and interested
- Speech is clear
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
- Shows about a week’s work
- A little research – some in my own words
- Adults have done some of the work for me
- No interaction with the audience
- No humour
- Poor presentation
- Few pictures
- Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
- Reads the words on the presentation
- Clearly started at the last minute
- Hardly any info
- Parents have done a lot of it for me
- No pictures or steps
- Research is straight off the internet
- No humour
- Not finished on time
- Untidy presentation
- Speech is not very clear
Wow Tom a really really coooool pi. I like your pi and your pictures and the shoes
ReplyDeleteVery nice P.I it was a awesome P.I next time you could maybe do a bit more humer
ReplyDeleteGreat PI, Tom. You've used imagination in your topic and finding solutions. It was a very ambitious investigation which you completed really well. My suggestions for improvement would be that you either did a demonstration or had some video content so we could see them in action. But what a cool investigation, Tom.
ReplyDeleteAwesome P.I. Tom Your spring shoes were meeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnn! I just cant think of anything better you could do.
ReplyDeleteTom your P.I was springtastic (: I wish I could buy some of your sproes but next time speak more clearly
ReplyDeletei loved it it was amazing how it brok and no bad thing about it from violet
ReplyDeleteCool P.I Tom
ReplyDeleteIt was great that you told that you did't do some stuff when your dad did. Next time you could have a little less words on your poster.
From Anna
Wow that was a really clever PI Tom. It was good how you managed to get the right tools for your spring shoes. Next time put more expression into your voice~Jam ;c}
ReplyDeleteWow clever PI Tom, I would never have thought of that. Next time look at the audience more~ Indoo aka INDY :]
Great Idea Tom, your spring shoes were kwl. You spoke clearly but next time look at the audience rather than your paper lots~ Candy :)
Sproes ay. Pretty cool, pretty cool. So do you think when you get a job you would still want them. Keeping in mind that you would probaly be 13-14 years old. And have you ever tried them. But nice try on making your own. Nice PI to good presintastion great speakin and even better pics so nice.
ReplyDeleteJust try make it a bit more factful like more than just two.
From Saul
I loved it.It was amazing how it broke. From violet
ReplyDeleteBong Bong Bong Bong!! They look sooooooo fun Tom. I really enjoyed your PI Tom. I was interested and didn't look away the entire time! It is a really cool idea and VERY original! No bad comments.
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Sam says..... Boing Boing I liked the way you had ways if you were going to sell them you would improve them. Next time you could speak a bit clearer.
ReplyDeletenoah says .... bounce bounce bounce all i want to do is jump up and down after that amazing pi but you probably didnt need that much words on the board.
Caleb says ........ I could imagine you jumping up and down up and down just like the easter bunny but you probably didnt need that much words.
Awesome P.I Tom I would really like to have a go on them but it would be hard.
ReplyDeleteNext time you should try talking faster.
But awesome P.I
From Cam
Your PI was springtastic! (awesome) I really liked your topic it was interesting. Next time you could have bigger pics and less words on you board but other than that you had a great PI!!! Maddi :)
ReplyDeleteCool PI Tom!!! I liked how you made a prototype. Next time you could have tried them on. Jas :p
Cooltastic PI Tom I like it how you had a creative PI. I don't think you need to work on anything cause that was awesome from Salami :D
"Sproes! S100! Come and get them! Made by the amazing Tom Kirk!" If that was put in a QZ Times Ad, They would be a hit!!! The only problem was, um, maybe, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ha! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... Oh I've got nothing. Apart from....... to be honest, you did everything right. You only used the script once!!!!!!!!! Well done Tom. See ya coz I've gotta get the new Sproes. They're on sale!!!
ReplyDeleteNice topic very interesting.Lke the ivention !SPROES!
ReplyDeleteCan`t think of aaannyy Bad commets
boingtasctic P.I Tom i loved your sproes but sadly your sproes broke i just think of any folts of yours
ReplyDeleteBy Campbell
i liked your pi because the shoes were amzing they must be hard to make jaide
ReplyDeleteNICE SPROES TOM! I really liked them. They do look fun.
ReplyDeleteMabye try speaking a little faster next time
Nice P.I. Tom
ReplyDeleteI liked your title on your poster it was springtastic!
It would have been really cool and funny if you actually made an advert!
From Camryn Mabey
nice P.I tom i liked your sproes unlucky one broke
ReplyDeletecool spring shoes tom really cool topic now when I go home I will want to make some my self keep up the good work tom
ReplyDeleteby Jo Jo :)
That was cool Tom. Did you find making the shoes hard?
ReplyDeleteIt looked quite hard to make. It would be fun to make though.
It would be fun to try them.