My Reflection On Monday 3rd of May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School . He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story an a fishing experiece. We are lerning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have leant to get straight into the action. I think my story is pretty good because I have used a few simels and adjectives.To improve my writing next time I will use some more adjectives simeles ect.
This is a great story Tom. You used similes and adjectives effectively. Next time use voice and describe how you were feeling.
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